Thursday 5 July 2018
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Kia ora, I am Charlie from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you goto the town just for fun, you said you and your friends were bord but, what where you doing in town.
You brought me back to when me and my best friends yost togo for little walkes arownd town, we dont do it any more because we have to many things on.
I enjoyed the part when you said you guys were hungy because it told me how you feel, I quite like storys that tell me how they feel,but I think you need to work on your letters because you keep doing your I like this ( i ) nice work I love your blog.
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Mā te wā
Charlie
nice writing
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